Pros and cons are down below) Check out mmy vid (the game is the 3d there):
Advantages:
1. The story is cool, I love the idea a lot. It feels that the game needs a sequel or a full version!
2. The scares were powerful, I got scared several times and that means that the game is a good horror.
Disadvantages:
1. Lack of details. For example, if the character asks "what's wrong with the lights", there actually shoulf be lights (like a lamp or something liek that). If the character reads a book, it shouldn't be lying upside down.
2. The spelling. Sometimes misspelled thigs are funny, but in horror game, misspelling ruins the ambiance and the created tension.
Overall:
It's a very promising experience which need to be further developed to get the best rating. As is, it is 4/5 stars from me.
You did an amazing job on this one. I am very curious to see where you plan on to add in the future. the main jumpscare in this about had me changing myself haha
I played the game (second part of the video) and I like the start. Very good jumpscare, really surprised me. Aside from the grammatical errors, there was no solid backstory or anything to really build up the suspense. I imagine you are probably testing the waters and starting a bigger project with more meat to the story I hope. Overall you spooked me and that gets thumbs up from me.
thanks for playing, and yes this was just a test game to test out some tech and the atmosphere. I will be working on a game with this kind of atmosphere, but with a new and longer story.
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Very short, but some nice jump scares in here! The ending was a bit abrupt, but the overall atmosphere was great. I enjoyed this!
Pros and cons are down below) Check out mmy vid (the game is the 3d there):
Advantages:
1. The story is cool, I love the idea a lot. It feels that the game needs a sequel or a full version!
2. The scares were powerful, I got scared several times and that means that the game is a good horror.
Disadvantages:
1. Lack of details. For example, if the character asks "what's wrong with the lights", there actually shoulf be lights (like a lamp or something liek that). If the character reads a book, it shouldn't be lying upside down.
2. The spelling. Sometimes misspelled thigs are funny, but in horror game, misspelling ruins the ambiance and the created tension.
Overall:
It's a very promising experience which need to be further developed to get the best rating. As is, it is 4/5 stars from me.
Hope my feedback was useful!
Cool Game :)
I played the game (second part of the video) and I like the start. Very good jumpscare, really surprised me. Aside from the grammatical errors, there was no solid backstory or anything to really build up the suspense. I imagine you are probably testing the waters and starting a bigger project with more meat to the story I hope. Overall you spooked me and that gets thumbs up from me.
Hey! I checked out your game and thought it was pretty cool! Here's my playthrough if you want to check it out!
Hello, I played this game and it was fun, aside some grammatical mistakes it was a neat little game, good work :)
Thanks for playing!
Short, and gave a good creepy vibe. Good stuff!
Thanks, im glad you liked it!
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Thanks for playing!
Good short game, I would like to see more.
YouTuber: Fellowplayer
thanks for playing, and yes this was just a test game to test out some tech and the atmosphere. I will be working on a game with this kind of atmosphere, but with a new and longer story.
I like it, Short and sweet! Keep up the good work.
Thanks for playing my game, im glad you liked it!