Cool game. Have you thought about expanding on the story a bit. Answering questions like - Where did the book come from? How did the grandfather get it and so on?
For a shorter horror game this was actually really scary and I liked it so much that I put it in a video and it is the second game I play if that's alright. I hope you make more games in the future!
I played the game (heres the link) its okay for a start to a game but certainly needs work however looking at the textures and some of the other base things needed it does show some good potential
Overall, it's a very good short horror experience :) Check out the video down below :)
However, I don't really understand what's exactly inside that book... Is that just a book with verses from the bible in it to fight against the devil? Or something else?
Also... There's a problem with the language in this game.
I'm not trying to say that that I'm 100% good in English, because I'm not. But, I think English in this game needs to be improved, especially the wording. Every day is a school day :)
This was an amazing experience, great work to only make it in 24 hours. Well done. Cannot wait for your next project and an expansion of these ideas. Just amazing.
I havent played a game as scary as this in a loonnngg time. I love it. I believe one of the scares actually threw me off my seat! Though you could work on the grammar.
I was intrigued by this game because of its title and, It's good, just needs work. To begin, you should really add a warning about flashing lights, if a person with epilepsy plays it, you can cause some damage and get into some trouble. As well, you should add a sensitivity adjust for the mouse cursor, I believe it's a bit too high. Speaking of, at the end of the game, the mouse can't be seen and I wasn't able to quit the game afterwards without Task Manager. There were also a good amount of grammar mistakes but, that's an easy fix. I did like the mesh used for the demon thing, it looked really cool. Also, it's an interesting story but try to bring it out more, give it more of an impact. Good job, and keep working on it!!
Played the game with my family and we sure as hell got scared lol. It was a good time and interesting story. A couple spelling mistakes but that isn't a big issue. Keep it up!
I enjoyed this game. Though brief, it looks great and has some scary moments. I was a little thrown off by the writing though. Otherwise, I liked this. I’m eager to see more.
I made a whole lot of negative commentary on the grammar, but I just read you made this in 24 hours??? Grammar errors are forgiven! Anyway, the jumpscares are worth it and it's a great game to scare your friends with.
I enjoyed the gameplay, gave me quite the scare while exploring. I enjoyed the little details highlighting the area, and I especially enjoyed the disappearing acts of some items. It was fun to explore and uncover the rest of the game along the way. I do wish it was a bit longer, and I do wish there was more of a backstory.. However, I thoroughly enjoyed this game start to finish. Only thing I really disliked was how quick the game would end, it made me a bit cofused.. Overall a strong 4.5/5 (0:18 is where the game starts)
Not bad at all for a tech demo! If you are looking to add anything to this one I would recommend grabbing a fogged up window from the asset store and placing it behind the blinds, and adding a psychical light to the rooms. Overall it seems awesome for a 24hr tech demo! Wish I was skilled enough in unity to pull something like this off in 24 hours.
Good job! Nice way of using 4k/8k textures! and yeah just set the cursor mode to none and cursor visible to true when the game finishes and takes you back to the main menu!
Pros and cons are down below) Check out mmy vid (the game is the 3d there):
Advantages:
1. The story is cool, I love the idea a lot. It feels that the game needs a sequel or a full version!
2. The scares were powerful, I got scared several times and that means that the game is a good horror.
Disadvantages:
1. Lack of details. For example, if the character asks "what's wrong with the lights", there actually shoulf be lights (like a lamp or something liek that). If the character reads a book, it shouldn't be lying upside down.
2. The spelling. Sometimes misspelled thigs are funny, but in horror game, misspelling ruins the ambiance and the created tension.
Overall:
It's a very promising experience which need to be further developed to get the best rating. As is, it is 4/5 stars from me.
You did an amazing job on this one. I am very curious to see where you plan on to add in the future. the main jumpscare in this about had me changing myself haha
I played the game (second part of the video) and I like the start. Very good jumpscare, really surprised me. Aside from the grammatical errors, there was no solid backstory or anything to really build up the suspense. I imagine you are probably testing the waters and starting a bigger project with more meat to the story I hope. Overall you spooked me and that gets thumbs up from me.
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Cool game. Have you thought about expanding on the story a bit. Answering questions like - Where did the book come from? How did the grandfather get it and so on?
For a shorter horror game this was actually really scary and I liked it so much that I put it in a video and it is the second game I play if that's alright. I hope you make more games in the future!
I really liked the game, it took a second to get into it but when the jump scares started I really got into it.
Overall, it's a very good short horror experience :) Check out the video down below :)
However, I don't really understand what's exactly inside that book... Is that just a book with verses from the bible in it to fight against the devil? Or something else?
Also... There's a problem with the language in this game.
I'm not trying to say that that I'm 100% good in English, because I'm not. But, I think English in this game needs to be improved, especially the wording. Every day is a school day :)
Looking forward to your next project :)
This was a fun little game it was nice to play and had some good scares and was well timed. I recommend that you play this game for yourself.
This game was great for 24 hours!! And the nice little surprise got me pretty good! I hope to see more games from you soon!
To say this was made in 24 hours it's not bad, met a lovely friend as well!
This was an amazing experience, great work to only make it in 24 hours. Well done. Cannot wait for your next project and an expansion of these ideas. Just amazing.
Not a bad game! Grammar needs a ton of work tho.
I havent played a game as scary as this in a loonnngg time. I love it. I believe one of the scares actually threw me off my seat! Though you could work on the grammar.
I was intrigued by this game because of its title and, It's good, just needs work. To begin, you should really add a warning about flashing lights, if a person with epilepsy plays it, you can cause some damage and get into some trouble. As well, you should add a sensitivity adjust for the mouse cursor, I believe it's a bit too high. Speaking of, at the end of the game, the mouse can't be seen and I wasn't able to quit the game afterwards without Task Manager. There were also a good amount of grammar mistakes but, that's an easy fix. I did like the mesh used for the demon thing, it looked really cool. Also, it's an interesting story but try to bring it out more, give it more of an impact. Good job, and keep working on it!!
Cool game :) If you are interested in hearing a small review I left one at the end of the game
Short and sweet. Cheers!
Gameplay BR
I enjoyed this game. Though brief, it looks great and has some scary moments. I was a little thrown off by the writing though. Otherwise, I liked this. I’m eager to see more.
Have to admit, This freaked me out a bit XD good job!
This game had some really good jumpscares and overall creepy atmosphere. Good work! I also made a 3 scar games and it was the first game I played!
I made a whole lot of negative commentary on the grammar, but I just read you made this in 24 hours??? Grammar errors are forgiven! Anyway, the jumpscares are worth it and it's a great game to scare your friends with.
Skip to 10:29.I enjoyed the gameplay, gave me quite the scare while exploring. I enjoyed the little details highlighting the area, and I especially enjoyed the disappearing acts of some items. It was fun to explore and uncover the rest of the game along the way. I do wish it was a bit longer, and I do wish there was more of a backstory.. However, I thoroughly enjoyed this game start to finish. Only thing I really disliked was how quick the game would end, it made me a bit cofused.. Overall a strong 4.5/5 (0:18 is where the game starts)
Well i love the detail. but why you use zombie ?
The way this played with the lights was super effective, haven't really had that in a game from memory so really got me good!, 10/10
Pretty fun, honestly got a good scare out of it and made a video about it! Thanks for making this!
Not bad at all for a tech demo! If you are looking to add anything to this one I would recommend grabbing a fogged up window from the asset store and placing it behind the blinds, and adding a psychical light to the rooms.
Overall it seems awesome for a 24hr tech demo! Wish I was skilled enough in unity to pull something like this off in 24 hours.
Nice game, enjoy playing it so much
Good job! Nice way of using 4k/8k textures! and yeah just set the cursor mode to none and cursor visible to true when the game finishes and takes you back to the main menu!
Very short, but some nice jump scares in here! The ending was a bit abrupt, but the overall atmosphere was great. I enjoyed this!
Pros and cons are down below) Check out mmy vid (the game is the 3d there):
Advantages:
1. The story is cool, I love the idea a lot. It feels that the game needs a sequel or a full version!
2. The scares were powerful, I got scared several times and that means that the game is a good horror.
Disadvantages:
1. Lack of details. For example, if the character asks "what's wrong with the lights", there actually shoulf be lights (like a lamp or something liek that). If the character reads a book, it shouldn't be lying upside down.
2. The spelling. Sometimes misspelled thigs are funny, but in horror game, misspelling ruins the ambiance and the created tension.
Overall:
It's a very promising experience which need to be further developed to get the best rating. As is, it is 4/5 stars from me.
Hope my feedback was useful!
Cool Game :)
I played the game (second part of the video) and I like the start. Very good jumpscare, really surprised me. Aside from the grammatical errors, there was no solid backstory or anything to really build up the suspense. I imagine you are probably testing the waters and starting a bigger project with more meat to the story I hope. Overall you spooked me and that gets thumbs up from me.